Jun. 8th, 2006 (UTC)

  • Jun. 8th, 2006 03:54 am (UTC)
Yay! Yay! Yay! *flails about* [livejournal.com profile] lillianmorgan sent me a message saying that this was up and I got so excited and ran straight here, yay!!! I L-O-V-E this, like so very much. I was really taken with the format you used too. How everything was isolated, but also flowed so well together. Yay!

“Forgot you PCHers are all about community service.”

Heeeee! I love the banter between the two and how they are always posturing so much with each other. Of course, we know that the real reason that they do that is just because they've been so keen on getting nekkid with each other for so long. ;D Anyway, I was very impressed with the way you wrote their voices and there were a ton of lines in here that really made me giggle or nod.

“Seeing if you’re as tough as you say you are.”

Yeah, I really think part of the attraction to Weevil on Logan's part comes from the fact that he is a tough guy. I think something about his lifestyle would seem fascinating just because it was something that Logan had absolutely no experience with. Or maybe I'm just passing my own Weevil lustage off on Logan. Hee. But I really liked the way that you played them together.

“You don’t have a magic ass. It didn’t give me a personality transplant.”

For shame Weevil! Logan most certainly does have a magic ass! Duh, everybody knows that. I love the way you finished this, sort of open-ended but still tinged with a wee bit of sadness. Wonderful, marvelous stuff. *loves*

YAY!!! I am so pleased that you expanded this! I want you to write more! I am totally going to abuse the exclamation mark until you give in!! Write more!!! More Logan/Weevil now!!!!!!!! *bangs spoon* Also, I got such a kick out of you calling me "sweet and delightful" and now I feel all loved! *smooches you*


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