Thanks for all your help and encouragement with this!! *HUGS*

I'm so very delighted that you love it!! And I'm very pleased that you like the belt sentence because I enjoy being able to say something by focusing on a detail, and that particular sentence just wrote itself.

Yeah, I feel that they're unlikely to be able to deal with the bigger question in any real way. But that their actions speak for more of a bond between them than they'd admit.

I'm glad that you like the changes! And yay for the voices working - big relief here about that! And I love your reaction to the ending!!!!

Thanks!!! Fo shizzle *g*