Dec. 7th, 2007 (UTC)

  • Dec. 7th, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the wonderful, hopeful ending. Your attention to detail painted vivid scenes and the dialogue was always in voice. Leaving our two guys grinning goofily at one another was perfect.

This made me laugh out loud: "It’s all repression, repression, repression and then next thing you know they’re caught snorting blow off a teen hooker.” What a stellar, in voice line.

This was also a great Xander mental aside: "Objects in the mirror may be closer than they appear, but they’re getting further away by the second."

This entertaining story is one I'll revisit in the future. Thanks for the highly entertaining read.


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