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HAPPY BIRTHDAY [livejournal.com profile] stoney321!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you are having a wonderful day!!!! You are such a smart, funny and fun person. I'm so happy that I got to meet you recently. *g* Since I can't give you Will Ferrell or Sparrington lovin', I've written you a Connor drabble because I know that you love Connor (me too!).

This is set late season 3, around the time Connor's just arrived in L.A.


Fries with That
by Cordelianne



“Do you want fries with that?” The girl with a net over her hair taps her fingers on the box that beeps when it’s poked.

He’s exposed under the bright lights. Connor spins, sizing up his surroundings.

“Sir? Sir?” She's looking at him the same way that vampire does. Connor looks down, then jerks his head up again. “You okay?”

He nods. His eyes dart around the room.

“O-kay.” She collects some of the crumpled bills and coins he’s dropped on the counter, and pushes the remaining money towards him along with his tray. “Take the fries. You need them.”


*end*

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[identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2006 06:04 pm (UTC)
Really brilliant grasp of Connor and his uncertainty with the world. Poor guy! As ever you say so much with the emotion and sense of the drabble, rather than with just the 100 words.
He’s exposed under the bright lights. Connor spins, sizing up his surroundings.
I love how a McDonalds, so banal to us, causes Connor to nearly lose it. So well done.
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2006 07:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much for the lovely comment! I really enjoyed examining how Connor would react to things we take for granted when he's first in L.A. I'm particularly delighted by your comment about the emotion and sense of the drabble! Yay! *g* Thanks!

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