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As promised - on schedule - there is more fic!!! *g*

Title: Murder at the Neptune Express
Author: [livejournal.com profile] cordelianne
Chapter: 4/8
Pairing: Spike/Xander, Logan/Weevil (eventually)
Rating: R
Word Count: 957
Feedback: Yes please. Concrit is very welcome by email.
Disclaimer: Sadly not mine, Joss and Rob Thomas own them.
Summary: This is set in the summer of 2005, after season one of Veronica Mars and 2 years after BtVS ended (one year after AtS ended).
Spike and Xander are a couple when the story starts and are both working with Buffy, Giles and the other slayers and watchers, etc. They go to Neptune to investigate some suspicious reports.
A/N: Thanks to the completely awesome and wonderful [livejournal.com profile] savoytruffle and spookymonkey for the invaluable betas. Any mistakes are mine.

For previous chapters go here.


Murder at the Neptune Express
by Cordelianne


CHAPTER FOUR


“Let me get this straight, and believe me that word choice was ironic, you and your wanna-be punk boyfriend’s big plan to save my sister is to go to the Neptune Express? A martini bar? Could this plan be any gayer?”

“Tell me again why we’re bringing this kid?” Spike glared into the rearview mirror as he lit his cigarette.

“Logan. And so he doesn’t charge me for breaking and entering. Spending the night in jail while I wait for you to call Giles to bail me out? So not my kind of fun.” Xander rubbed Spike’s shoulder for a moment, and then turned around to face Logan. “Trina had a Neptune Express flyer in her room, and it’s where one of the other girls was last seen. It’s our best lead right now.”

“This kind of thing was hotter with Veronica.” Xander heard Logan mutter.

"Hey, buddy, I'll have you know we're plenty hot,” he said. “And who's Veronica?"

“Ex-girlfriend. Bad break-up.”

“Been there. Not fun, but it gets better.” Xander grinned at Spike, who ashed on the dashboard and glanced at Xander before turning his attention back to the road. “And what did you mean by ‘this kind of thing’?”

“Her dad’s a private investigator and she knows all his tricks. She’s good, sometimes too good.”

Logan stared moodily out the window as they lapsed into awkward silence. The kind of silence that stretched out like … something really long. Xander sucked at metaphors, or was that a simile? He breathed a sigh of relief when they pulled into the parking lot under the glittering sign for the Neptune Express.

He had worried about getting Logan in, but it wasn’t a problem. He’d forgotten about fake IDs.

“What now?” Logan scanned the room. It was a Tuesday night and the bar was quiet, with just a few couples at some of the tables.

“I don’t know about you but I’m getting a vodka martini, shaken not stirred.” Xander headed to the bar. Spike shook his head and stalked to the back and through a door into a smoky room.

Xander pretended the bartender hadn’t been rolling his eyes and happily sipped his martini. He was still trying to get fully into the Secret Agent frame of mind when loud voices startled him, causing him to slosh some of his drink.

Drying his hand on his pants and cursing his lack of coolness, he swiveled around on the barstool to see Logan toe-to-toe with a guy with a shaved head and leather jacket, their faces just a few inches apart. He wondered if they were about to fight or kiss. The bouncer obviously wasn't expecting the kissing and shifted on his chair.

Xander rushed over and gently pushed them apart. “Hey, hey. No need to get all excited. There’s plenty of martinis for everyone.”

They both gave him a good imitation of Spike’s You’re an idiot look. But it had worked, so who was calling him an idiot now?

Okay, the shaven headed guy was. “Who’s this idiot?”

“So now you’re asking me questions? I thought your thing was to accuse me of murder and then shoot at my car.” Logan glared at the other guy.

“Sounds like you two have some unresolved issues. I’m sure we can deal with them and the reason we’re here–” Xander gave Logan a pointed look. “– if we all just sit down and have a drink.”

***

Xander was now questioning his get the enemies drunk plan. They’d been arguing for at least an hour now about a bridge, some guy named Felix, and some weird lingo that involved numbers and letters. Xander was feeling even less cool and very bored.

He stared at the bottom of his second – or was it third? – martini, and returned his attention to the door Spike had disappeared into.

Should he be worried? What if Spike was hurt or in trouble? He totally didn’t blend in in a place like this. And, speaking of, neither did this Weevil guy.

Xander interrupted their back-and-forth. “Why are you here?”

“Yeah, what are you doing in a place like this?” Logan asked.

Weevil sighed. “My cousin’s missing. This is the last place anyone saw her. I’m trying to track her down.”

Xander pulled out a crumpled paper from his pocked and tried to decipher Spike’s handwriting. “Teresa Navarro?”

Weevil yanked the paper from his hand. “How’d you know that? Who the fuck are you?”

“Okay, here’s the thing –”

Spike’s hand clamped down on Xander’s shoulder. “Time to go. Now.”

Xander was already on his feet, letting Spike hurry him out the door. They’d made it to the car before Xander was yanked backwards and knocked to the ground.

“Tell me why –” Spike had Weevil pinned to the car, his arm cutting off Weevil’s sentence. Logan had come running over and was standing nearby surveying the scene.

"I don't have time for you. Just keep your hands off my -- Xander." Spike released his arm from Weevil’s throat.

“He’s looking for one of the missing girls.” Xander pushed himself up and looked at Weevil. “The same ones we’re looking for.”

Spike nodded and released his grip on Weevil. “Let’s get a move on before our girls get offered up as dinner.”

“Dinner?” Logan asked. “Now you’re telling me they’ve been kidnapped by cannibals?”

Spike snorted and gave him a scathing look. “No, vampires. Cannibals aren’t real.”

“You must be on some serious drugs, dude.”

“What the hell is going on?” Weevil adjusted his jacket.

“That’s what I’d like to know.”

A figure emerged from the shadows. It was the tiny blonde girl Xander’d talked to outside the Echolls house.



Continues here.

Comments

[identity profile] pikapika217.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
uh-oh! Roni heard you! now: will she believe it?

another good one! ^^
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2006 10:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks! It's fun to add Veronica into the mix. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy! *g*
[identity profile] reremouse.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2006 11:10 pm (UTC)
small blonde girls always mean trouble ahead for Spike and Xander. also - hee! Your Xander gets more Xandery with every chapter and I am seriously impressed by how distinct and authentic you make everyone's voices without relying on catch phrases. I'm hooked babe.
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 12:06 am (UTC)
Thanks!! I'm very happy you're hooked! Yay! And small blonde girls are trouble - and hopefully helpful too. *g* That's so wonderful to hear about my Xander voice - I credit my betas for really pushing me. And it's really important to me that the voices are distinct and authentic without relying on catch phrases, so it makes my day for you to say that!! *g*
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[personal profile] yourlibrarian wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 01:15 am (UTC)
"I don’t know about you but I’m getting a vodka martini, shaken not stirred.” Xander headed to the bar.

Nice callback :>

Ooh, things heating up!
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 02:13 am (UTC)
Thanks! I had fun with the Bond thing. I'm glad you're enjoying the developments in the story! *g*
[identity profile] vampirefever.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 09:03 am (UTC)
He wondered if they were about to fight or kiss.

Kiss, kiss, kiss *g* Canon gives us enough of the fighting - lol!

I'm so totally enjoying this. Is it next Tuesday yet?
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 04:20 pm (UTC)
*Notes your vote is for them to kiss* And you're right, there's plenty of fighting in canon! Yay - I'm so glad you're enjoying!! Thanks! *g*
[identity profile] justwolf.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 11:52 am (UTC)
O, I'm loving the crossover and all the Spanderlisciousness. Great dialouge and characterisation too and cracking plot.
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 04:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying because I'm having a blast writing this. (And I love the term Spanderlisciousness!) That's lovely to hear about the dialogue, characterization and plot!! Thanks! *g*
[identity profile] brandil.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 12:46 pm (UTC)
Logan Weevil tension.

::contented sigh::
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 04:24 pm (UTC)
Yay to enjoying the Logan/Weevil tension! It makes me happy too. *g*
[identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 05:39 pm (UTC)
Xander's "There's plenty of martinis for everyone" was a perfect Xander tense moment deflector. I wondered how you were going to get Weevil into this, and now Veronica's in the mix, too! What did Spike learn in the murky recesses of the smoky back room? I'm on the edge of my seat until next Tuesday.
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2006 09:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I admit to loving that line, so I'm pleased that you felt it was the perfect Xander tense moment deflector. *g* It's been fun to get Weevil and Veronica in the story. I'm happy that you're looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what Spike discovered! Thanks. *g*
[identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 21st, 2006 05:38 pm (UTC)
*dances about anxiously*
Oh oh oh oh, is it Veronica? Can we see Spike-in-gameface related freakouts?
More please. *puppy eyes*
Pleeeeeeeeeeease?
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2006 03:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm very pleased you're wanting more!! And I think you'll be very pleased by the developments in the next chapter! *g*
[identity profile] electricalgwen.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 21st, 2006 09:23 pm (UTC)
"Hey, buddy, I'll have you know we're plenty hot.” Ohhhh, yeah.

Fantastic, as always. :D I've had this tab open for almost 48 hours while RL was busy!! finally get to read properly.

I like Xander's musings about metaphors vs. similes, and him interceding with Logan and Weevil. So very Xander, the willingness to jump in and be goofy to defuse the situation - and I love the "who was calling him an idiot now? Okay, the shaven headed guy was."

"Just keep your hands off my -- Xander." That gives me gleeful warm fuzzies. *drools over possessive Spike*
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2006 03:33 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Yay for still enjoying it! And I hear you about RL, hopefully it's calmed down.

I'm glad you like the hot line, as well the metaphors vs. similes part which I'm very fond of. *g* I do love when Xander jumps in in his goofy way, unfortunately Weevil's not the kind of guy to find that endearing. And yay for liking possessive Spike! *g*

Oh, and I'll use my Logan/Weevil icon so you can see what they both look like.
[identity profile] berettelser.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2006 05:08 pm (UTC)
Things were moving fast there at the end, I really liked Spikes reaction over Xander!

This speaks of Xander to me:*Logan stared moodily out the window as they lapsed into awkward silence. The kind of silence that stretched out like … something really long. Xander sucked at metaphors, or was that a simile? He breathed a sigh of relief when they pulled into the parking lot under the glittering sign for the Neptune Express.*

You capture Xanders voice nicely!
[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2006 06:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm pleased that you enjoyed Spike being protective of Xander. I'm very happy that you like the part you quoted and that it's very Xander! I love Xander's character so it's lovely to hear that I capture his voice. *g*
[identity profile] shadowscast.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 28th, 2006 01:03 am (UTC)
He was still trying to get fully into the Secret Agent frame of mind when loud voices startled him, causing him to slosh some of his drink.

Hee. We seem to share a conviction that Xander does not do a very convincing Secret Agent impression.

They both gave him a good imitation of Spike’s You’re an idiot look. But it had worked, so who was calling him an idiot now?

This is good, classic Xander. He may not be suave, but he's effective.

Also: hooray for the arrival of Veronica! (Though, won't this complicate the fulfillment of the Logan/Weevil promise?)

[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 30th, 2006 07:45 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah, I love Xander but I don't see him as a good Secret Agent. *g* But it's fun to have him try! Yay for that being classic Xander! And I'm pleased you're happy about Veronica's arrival - I just had to include her in the story, it's so her town. Thanks! *g*

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